Comment #1: Well Rick you had a great lead in, I was really rootin’ for ya, until you got to the end of the letter. You might have come across a bit harsh there at the end, but I’ll bet ya got the Jolly Man’s attention. May not be the attention you want in the end, but you do have his attention.
Comment #2: I like the letter transition you did with the shading and the oval showing the portion of the letter as it’s read down. Very cool. You do some really neat stuff with how you go from panel to panel with Rick at times, I really like that about your art work.
Are you certain your threats will persuade Santa? Or will it get you lumps of coal? Hmmm….
Santa doesn’t care. Who doesn’t ignore their Landlord?
Comment #1: Well Rick you had a great lead in, I was really rootin’ for ya, until you got to the end of the letter. You might have come across a bit harsh there at the end, but I’ll bet ya got the Jolly Man’s attention. May not be the attention you want in the end, but you do have his attention.
Comment #2: I like the letter transition you did with the shading and the oval showing the portion of the letter as it’s read down. Very cool. You do some really neat stuff with how you go from panel to panel with Rick at times, I really like that about your art work.